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lh33334
03-03-2012, 10:43 AM
Petals of early spring
strewn on the vast of loneliness

Hope of deep winter
hidden in the soul of profoundness

You
are always on my mind
like a moon shining in my sky
Buh4Bee
03-03-2012, 11:35 AM
This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.
lh33334
03-03-2012, 10:01 PM
This is very lovely. Although you posted in the wrong section- try Writing under Poetry.

thanks for your comment.
Sorry for posting it in the wrong section. I am new on this forum and didn't realize there is a section called "personal proetry" until I posted it.
Can someone move this thread to its right section?

Thanks for reading.
Buh4Bee
03-03-2012, 10:22 PM
People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.
lh33334
03-03-2012, 10:36 PM
People do it all the time and I am glad you caught your typo- loneliness instead of loneness.

yes, it is a typo, I realized that afterwards.
Buh4Bee
03-04-2012, 05:24 PM
Something to play for your loved one, even if it is a bit sad:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VI94AsuvUUA