The Wing of a Dove

[ShadowsCool]

The wing of a dove
Mid air over the moonlit mountains
Over a blanket of pure snow
Arrayed in a sky filled with stars
Cleansing the air pure
Enthralling all breathable creatures.

These majestic green mountains
Brim with maple syrup
Downy and palpable
Sweet to the swaying tongue
With wine strumming through the glacial rivers
Streaming down an embankment of sculpted stones.

From a wing of a dove this you see
An enthralling countryside
Riveting and set free
As you are hovering over me
Without a care
Flaunting the wonder of your creation.

[Buh4Bee]

overall i like your images. a bit too decadent at times for my taste but i still enjoyed the images.

[BookBeauty]

In many of your poems, there is great flowery description without being too telling. This is one of your best, in my opinion. It's got texture, unique imagery that sticks solid to my mind instantly after being read.