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Alexander III
02-29-2012, 02:59 PM
At first I posted this to the general writing thread, but then I realized it was more prose-poem than anything else, and that it was better fitted to the audience of this forum.


Ode to my Generation

We belong to an age, to this age:

The old Pantheon lies crumbling with ivy. It's Gods are now forgotten, all but a few, who remain to monopolize the lives and devotion of men. Honor has been exiled, so Money is left unquestioned to sprawl himself on the throne; and Love like Hamlet weeping at Cladius' stone court, must pace in silence. Beauty was left to drown within the Serpentine, as men in straw boaters softly whistled during their promenande around the park. Her Altar remained empty like a fireless tombstone, until Artifice crawled upon the alter and crafted her nest there.

This is an age of its own kind. This is the sad and lonely age we have inherited. This is the sad and lonely age which all previous generations knew they had inherited; and all future generations shall find this age a curse unique to them.

This is the fertile crescent which mankind was thrusted upon, as it always will be and as it always was.

Alexander III
03-02-2012, 09:49 AM
Petty bump

YesNo
03-02-2012, 10:03 AM
The present moment is all one has. I guess that would make it a "fertile crescent" to anyone of any generation living it.

I don't see how your generation as a whole is "sad and lonely". That might be a temporary state of mind for some members of it, however. It should pass, like all things.

breathtest
03-02-2012, 12:42 PM
I think it is the fact that the old virtues such as honor, chivalry, love etc. all seem to have left our generation to some extent, people being more interested in money and materials. The sadness and loneliness comes from the emptiness that results from a life of material pleasures.

JuniperWoolf
03-04-2012, 05:53 AM
I think it is the fact that the old virtues such as honor, chivalry, love etc. all seem to have left our generation to some extent, people being more interested in money and materials.

I think you have it exactly.

Alexander III
03-04-2012, 09:40 PM
Thank you for your comments, though I think my poem was a bit misunderstood.