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noetic
02-25-2012, 07:53 PM
Hi everyone, I've recently taken a serious theme (self transformation - something I definately need!) - and had some fun with it, by writing in a fairly haughty style trying to practice with using more sophisticated vocabulary than I usually would (have been revising and learning better vocabulary the last few weeks...)

Would like to read your thoughts on this, so if you read it please post any feedback :)

Thanks!
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Decree to self

I am not going to be indigent any longer. No, I am going to break from this aberration that is my present life circumstance. This break will be no abeyance, but will mark a water-shed in my life. Absconding fervently from the bugbear that has held me here for so long I will find resolve and doggedly pursue a programme of self development and realisation such as never has been seen or heard of in the history of noetic man.

I have woken from the drubbing imparted at the hands of apathy and self inflicted sophistry, legerdemain of the wost kind! The worst kind of deceit is the kind that blinds oneself to ones own failings. Thirty years this has lasted, (give or take ten for a halcyon youth), enough is enough.I am ready to start living the life I was meant to live. I will show no clemency towards the beast in me, that wanton prurient creature is no more. Excavated from the depths of my soul.

Success is mine for the taking. If you want an appellation, call me aspirant. My reading and learning are to be truly inordinate. Greater than the furthest ocean will be the extent of my wisdom exceeded only by the scope of my transformation.

No longer will the chagrin of my past actions torment me, now I am the generalissimo of my fate!

Taking strong and firm action I will build a life worth living. No longer will I hide behind a priggish patina, no longer will I inwardly cower. No I will stand tall and stand firm. I have every right to be on this earth. Every right to be doing whatever I am doing whenever I am doing it.

All are philistines when assessed against the degree of my learning and erudition in this mundus novus. Let them enjoy their pettifoggery while I repose against resplendent certainty, enjoying the rapture of complete self belief.

Retrenchment will become my friend. Parsimony my rite. Nothing will scotch the realisation of this supreme destiny for wealth is power, is it not? I will be supercilious, imperious even. I will moderate my apettites. My destiny is at the head of the table not inebriated under it. It’s time to toughen up, to inure myself to the rankling cavils and perfidy of everyday social interaction. The vagaries of this life will no longer phase me.

No. I am the setter, I am the craftsman, I create everything in this world. How dare I settle for anything less than me being absolutely right, unequivocally respected. I care not a jot for friendship, it is respect I demand!

People will know of my greatness not vicariously. They will know and experience it directly as a refulgent beam in an otherwise pall of plebeian smog. They will be in awe when they witness my greatness, clambering to capture just a fleeting shard of what I have become.

Bumptious? I don’t care.

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Thanks :cheers2: