the ball

[cacian]

as midnight rush trickles in drags
cinderalla frock gets second dabs,
the ball is ready
for a night time ride,
the crowd is fancy
the groove is dancy,
it's chic high heels and rafia stunts
in easy strolls and moves of flaunts

[BookBeauty]

I like this one, it's very playful! I stumble on the last line a bit, maybe I'd switch words around to better the flow of that one, but besides that, this is one of my favourites of yours, cacian. :)

[cacian]

Hi BookBeauty I thank you very much for reading.:smile5:
I have swapped the words around of the last lines.
I am glad you enjoyed this one.