We just means me

[Jerrybaldy]

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[Delta40]

So true of us all....

[Bar22do]

I will leave you breathless
bewildered and alone.
Me, I know my place
Irrelevant,
writing crap
beheld by some
as poetry.
Laugh Out Loud.
Lmfao
Rotflmfao.
Self destruct
nothing lost.


(but) "precious time is slipping away
(were you) only king for a day?
Precious time is slipping away
(was she) only queen for a day?"

"Didn't (she) come to bring you a sense of wonder
(...) to lift your fiery vision bright
(...) to bring you a sense of wonder in the flame?"

was it "all for (your)self(-destruction)"?

"Look down - look down
that lonesome road
before you travel on"...

(get busy) raisin cain"
"back on the top", Jerry! don't you hear her crying -
"baby please don't go", without you, (all) "is lost".... ?


Your poem, Jerry, tells me of desperation, it has a thunder power and the suddenness of a heart forever young... Sudden there swooped an eagle downward... and even your self-deprecation is good poetry. Well yes, I'm of those who behold your writing as poetry. Bar

[Haunted]

might as well say it out loud. What do we get to lose.