Spent...

[Little Gal]

pearl dreams and
songless fear cupped with
difference of
voice and
stilled spin, and float-
all that risen and sinking glow...
No distance and space,
unnamed;
all powers begin in a shade of
roots and entwined words in circles...
roses bloom on fences like
sun falling behind
in quiet standing and wooden gaze
of ease
and slow bleeding.
.........

[Bar22do]

A moving little poem, Gal, and these lines

roses bloom on fences like
sun falling behind
in quiet standing and wooden gaze
of ease
and slow bleeding.
.........

are my preferred... Thanks a lot. Bar

[BookBeauty]

Wow, this is exquisite. I'm surprised that there isn't more feedback. :) And I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this piece. I love the words used. There is such gorgeous natural imagery that flows so well together. Breathtaking.

[Little Gal]

A moving little poem, Gal, and these lines

are my preferred... Thanks a lot. Bar

I thank you too... :)

[Little Gal]

Wow, this is exquisite. I'm surprised that there isn't more feedback. :) And I was very pleasantly surprised when I read this piece. I love the words used. There is such gorgeous natural imagery that flows so well together. Breathtaking.

:) I am glad you liked it this well... it is always a lovely thing to be appreciated and it feels very good indeed if the appreciation is something like yours...
Thanks a ton.. :)

[Devilio]

I wonder how wonderful your imagination prowess is. You seem to be a born writer. Keep up the good work LG.

[Little Gal]

I wonder how wonderful your imagination prowess is. You seem to be a born writer. Keep up the good work LG.

thanks D... :D u r really a boost... :p:iagree: