Love Sacrifice

[Dark Muse]

Love Sacrifice

Your lips breathe
memories
into my soul.

You carry me
away into a
world of our own.

Trespass
the Eden of my
flesh, your fingers
pluck the fruits
of my garden.

Forbidden to taste,
I become lost
among the tangle
of our limbs.

Creating labyrinths,
our bodies
move, and I am
rendered helpless
to your serpent's
offering.

I am your sacrifice
strewn upon
your altar
my heart offered
to you, as my body
writhes in your
possession.

[Buh4Bee]

DM- This is a hot piece!

[Dark Muse]

Hehe thank you. I was hoping it would not get me in trouble posting it here.

[Buh4Bee]

Haha! It has to be much more overt as well as EROTIC! And you have to write about licking another's body parts.

[Dark Muse]

Haha! It has to be much more overt as well as EROTIC! And you have to write about licking another's body parts.

LOL ok, I always hesitate with my more sensual works because I do not know how strict they are here about things of that nature.

[Buh4Bee]

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