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ShadowsCool
02-11-2012, 01:13 AM
~ A Goddess ~

That scorchingly beautiful woman
Beyond my dreams:
The eternal realm.

Born not of man
But of his dreams,
A godly princess, for though it seems.

She lives in a place
Not of rocks nor flesh,
She is beyond the external.

Having no end
Her beauty is everlasting,
Blinding to my mortal eyes.

She hears the heavens
Arch angels sing;
Serenading her Divine.

I stand on sands
On stones and waves;
With beginning and end: my grave.

The mere beauty of her
I can not describe,
Her face is not privy to my mind.

She is a goddess
To the Gods.
A woman of pleasure
To us mortals.




Far Away In Some Legion Land

Far away in some legion galaxy
Way beyond the footsteps of man,
There is a place I believe in,
A panoply of heavenly light.

Far from my emergence
Where dreams can never stir,
I believe there is hope I can be in;
The faith of me and you.

Untouched by wither and daily grinds
Of living to die and dying to live.
Where the highest eagles can fly
The kind with heavenly trills

Soaring beyond this earth,
This place of make believe,
That only delivers hope
But conquers with death.

A place God enunciates his word,
And commandments flow through
In hearts of serenity,
That exist with me and you.

Far away in some legion land
Where death is no longer true,
Where the only thing left
The love of me with you.

BookBeauty
02-11-2012, 05:49 AM
A cosmic love poem to your Divinity? :D

Thank you for sharing this piece, it seems that you really put a lot of heart into it.

To lay bare the bones of our beliefs is very difficult at times, and very brave.

For, does a rainbow become any less miraculous, knowing how it was made?

ShadowsCool
02-11-2012, 10:37 AM
A cosmic love poem to your Divinity? :D

Thank you for sharing this piece, it seems that you really put a lot of heart into it.

To lay bare the bones of our beliefs is very difficult at times, and very brave.

For, does a rainbow become any less miraculous, knowing how it was made?

Thank you BookBeauty for taken the time and commenting on my poem. I don't know if I'm brave, but I like fairy tales I guess. Reality can be rough sometimes with people putting up walls.

I like writing love poems even when it's not fashionable. Thanks for being one of the few to comment on my poems. It means a lot to my writing.:)

BookBeauty
02-11-2012, 12:58 PM
I'm glad that some small token I give helps your work's progress, and I hope you'll continue to share. :)