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BookBeauty
02-10-2012, 06:07 AM
Platter produced,
Pronounced, protruding
Fingers frying,
Frenetic, and feverish
Flighty and fervent,
Tear in torment
Trying to pry,
The casings for
the contents,
Of perfect pistachios.
Jagged and jutting,
Nails are ruined.

Hawkman
02-10-2012, 06:18 AM
This is fun :D

Buh4Bee
02-10-2012, 07:03 AM
Yup, fun is a good way to describe this.

PrinceMyshkin
02-10-2012, 01:31 PM
Wittily worded and welcome!

ShadowsCool
02-10-2012, 02:40 PM
Nice and the sounding of words are delicious.

Sancho Panza
02-10-2012, 02:50 PM
It is one of those poems that cries out to be read aloud. Awesome alliteration and amusing also.

cacian
02-10-2012, 03:39 PM
fun read BookBeauty thank you :)

BookBeauty
02-10-2012, 04:19 PM
Thanks so much to everyone for your enjoyment of this exciting exploitation of expression.

Alliteration is always amazing and awesome. :D

Little Gal
02-11-2012, 12:46 AM
too good... love d speed about it, but even more than that, the name! :)

Bar22do
02-11-2012, 05:31 AM
fantastic, bravo!!!

Jerrybaldy
02-11-2012, 10:04 PM
awesome alliteration, amazing . perfect pitstachioness. ratiffied respect.