A Letter To Words

[Revolte]

There are overflowing thoughts
in my process of thinking
when I write to you
scattered shards of this mind
that births illusion.

And though I find no sweetness in it
I love you so very much
that if you where real
and not just keys and ink
I would hold you, kiss you

while our bodies climax bare in truth
and dance in lover-lullaby
-the song of couple's fate-
'till nothing was ever real,
nothing at all but words.

And those words that we write
will be etched on our skins
as tattoos and metal bars
so they may tell of our love
that imagined you real.

[Bar22do]

Such a strong feeling of passion... but I hope "metal bars" are only words, for N and her/his beloved seem to be far away one from the other and N should not close his/herself from new encounters! (I mean when time has healed the wound of separation...) - I like it whenever you're back, Revolte.

[Revolte]

Such a strong feeling of passion... but I hope "metal bars" are only words, for N and her/his beloved seem to be far away one from the other and N should not close his/herself from new encounters! (I mean when time has healed the wound of separation...) - I like it whenever you're back, Revolte.

<3 :iagree:

[Hawkman]

An extraordinarily good poem, Revolte. You have nurtured real talent while you've been away. Keep it up.

You should lose the apostrophe before till though, or drop the second l. One or t'other, not both :)

Live and be well - H

[Revolte]

An extraordinarily good poem, Revolte. You have nurtured real talent while you've been away. Keep it up.

You should lose the apostrophe before till though, or drop the second l. One or t'oher, not both :)

Live and be well - H

I bottle fed it Rose Wine served with a side of :alien: .