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Jerrybaldy
01-31-2012, 09:08 PM
I have a girlfriend
she appears to love me
you aint gonna get good poetry
until she leaves me.
BookBeauty
01-31-2012, 09:10 PM
This is amusing. I would wonder if it had been written before, like a Nantucket thing. You could go places with this! :P
AuntShecky
02-01-2012, 04:39 PM
Ah!
Don't change a syllable.
cacian
02-02-2012, 04:15 AM
LOL
oh dear!!
Jack of Hearts
02-02-2012, 04:50 AM
Hahaha, nice. Hopefully you get heartbroken and lonely real soon and pony up the goods.







J
Hawkman
02-02-2012, 05:56 AM
Hahaha, nice. Hopefully you get heartbroken and lonely real soon and pony up the goods.

J

I agree with the above sentiment, only I'd suggest you use mules. They're cheeper ;)

H
Buh4Bee
02-02-2012, 07:02 AM
Love it!
Bar22do
02-02-2012, 11:18 AM
I have a problem
it appears to stick close to me
I lack the language but
love writing poetry...!

(so this is what you get...)

congratulations (first, for the girlfriend - I'd rather she never leaves you of course - but I am a sacrificial creature; second, for your offering - yes, don't change a line!) and continue writing poetry, your very bad is often our best! Bar