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Darcy88
01-31-2012, 05:03 PM
The rest of the class had left. Squared off on the black sweaty matts gleaming in the stark fluorescence were Darcy and Sean. Big and bearded, tall and tattooed, Sean advanced slow and inexorable as a tractor, fatal as time, as death. He tucked his chin and looked at Darcy with eyes cold and pitiless, like those of a gunner behind the slit of a tank. Darcy circled nimbly and with grace, confident, hope lightening his step.

Darcy fought then not against Sean but against himself, against his own weaknesses and shortcomings - his own shadow. He fought also against fate, against every hour spent at his wretched soul-stultifying job, against every missed opportunity, every romantic regret.

A feint, a lunge, a rattling jab and booming hook, Darcy hit him with all he had, snapping the mesmeric tension of the dance. He wheeled to the outside wearing a satisfied grin. But something wasn't right. Sean looked untouched, his posture as solid, his eyes as unfeeling, though he'd been twice struck flush.

A rage came over Darcy. Hate surged through his veins, fire flared in his cheeks. Again he feinted, again he lunged, this time connecting with a straight and an uppercut, before ending the attack with a precise and powerful knee.

Neither did this attack inflict any visible harm. Sean's massive form faced him implacable and unaffected, in dark demoralizing mockery. 'Damn him' thought Darcy as he darted in, delivering with desperate striving a kick to Sean's thigh and jab to his chin.

Nothing. Spit landing on a sidewalk, a chicken pecking at its pen.

And then Sean exploded. Darcy tried to sidestep the path of the punch but it landed with fine force and fury flush to his gut. Breathless, his lead arm turned to rubber, he stood before Sean as Paris before Achilles, this time doomed by a splintered bow. What came next, whether a single strike or a combination, Darcy never knew. Down he went, out cold, a David lying broken in the dust at Goliath's feet.

As he lay there he dreamt. He saw himself an old man, looking back on a life wasted, his soul wracked with regret....

His eyes opened some minutes later unto an amorphous blur that could have been Sean, could have been anything. A gruff unsympathetic voice somewhere spoke. "Get up you pussy. Let's go grab a beer."

In his daze Darcy managed to weakly mutter, "same time, next week."

And then he helped himself up.

Jack of Hearts
01-31-2012, 06:39 PM
Darcy is a boy?





J



EDIT: Interesting piece, nonetheless.

BookBeauty
01-31-2012, 07:13 PM
Thank you for sharing this little fight-microcosm. :) It has me contemplating life and its inevitable downsides. Although we will sometimes be overcome, we will always have a chance to get up again, and try again next week. :P

Darcy88
01-31-2012, 07:46 PM
@ Jack of Hearts: Darcy is my middle name and yeah its unisex. Some places its used only for girls, others only for boys, then some for both. And thanks.

@ BookBeauty: Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it and got something out of it.

smerdyakov
01-31-2012, 07:46 PM
Well composed piece this one, Darcy. A bit of a mismatch this one tho, no?
Don't see you 'round these parts of the boards much :)
OKay, so, you are guilty of the odd cliche but there's some excellent imagery in there too. Like this one:

Nothing. Spit landing on a sidewalk, a chicken pecking at its pen.

Keep up the creativity man! Good Stuff!

Darcy88
01-31-2012, 08:00 PM
Well composed piece this one, Darcy. A bit of a mismatch this one tho, no?
Don't see you 'round these parts of the boards much :)
OKay, so, you are guilty of the odd cliche but there's some excellent imagery in there too. Like this one:

Keep up the creativity man! Good Stuff!

Thanks Smerdyakov. I did once spar with a big tattooed behemoth who sent me flying with a front kick. That's where the idea came from. I will keep the creativity up. I'm going to write something else right now.

JuniperWoolf
02-01-2012, 03:08 AM
I liked it, very Fight Club. Story of my life, they don't have weight classes in most girls' tournaments because there are too few of us and I'm very small so I get my *** kicked often.

Darcy88
02-01-2012, 01:03 PM
I liked it, very Fight Club. Story of my life, they don't have weight classes in most girls' tournaments because there are too few of us and I'm very small so I get my *** kicked often.

You train Juniper? Half the students at the place I go to are women, most there for self-defense. Some of them would kick my butt.

JuniperWoolf
02-02-2012, 06:16 AM
Yep, I've been in taekwondo since I was six. I bet I could take you. ;)

Darcy88
02-02-2012, 11:33 AM
Yep, I've been in taekwondo since I was six. I bet I could take you. ;)

Cool. I hear taekwondo has some of the best kicks. And yeah, you probably could.:leaving:

JuniperWoolf
02-02-2012, 12:56 PM
And yeah, you probably could.:leaving:

Haha, come back, I'm kidding! Don't you know the inherent implication of a winking smiley face?

Darcy88
02-02-2012, 11:33 PM
Haha, come back, I'm kidding! Don't you know the inherent implication of a winking smiley face?

Nuh uh. Not happening. My mother warned me about girls like you. You lure a helpless boy in with a seductive smile and then BAMM! - spinning heel kick to the face.

JuniperWoolf
02-03-2012, 04:47 AM
Nuh uh. Not happening. My mother warned me about girls like you. You lure a helpless boy in with a seductive smile and then BAMM! - spinning heel kick to the face.

Haha damn! My plot is foiled once again!

Bonsai Ent
02-03-2012, 03:12 PM
I sometimes found the hyperbole a bit much, but I liked it, relatable and not everyone can describe fights so lucidly.