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cacian
01-27-2012, 08:33 AM
imagine the world
without a single fault
surprises will have you
singing the waltz.

do you ever see
the steep rise
from the deep?

imagine the laughter
the music of lighter
that takes you away
to a place of elatia.

do you ever speak
your thoughts
even louder
for fear of oppressing
feelings inside you?

imagine the streaks
the sun that warms you
it blows you a breeze
that swings you a please
lifting you higher to a mood
of erasure.

do you even care
for obscura and glare
when the outside
is glam and brighter then fair?


imagine the sound
the colours of life
it paints you
a draft
an image of self
dimentional awe
forever turning
circulars around
the center of earth.

do you sometime feel
the past
waving a cast
in search of a glance
of total immersion
to bring you a
fresher newer impression?


imagine yourself
approaching a moon
imagine your hand
lifting the brume
and just for a moment
you're sailing the sky
and breathing a truth
the dream of tomorrow.

Bar22do
01-27-2012, 03:31 PM
I read this, cacian, like life's celebration and a deep breath into a moment of harmony, resulting from paying attention to the positive... S4 is my preferred. Thanks so much for sharing, Bar

cacian
01-27-2012, 03:55 PM
Dear Bar22 it brings me great pleasure to know you have read and enjoyed this piece.
Thank you again for your positive feedback.:smile5: