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Little Gal
01-27-2012, 03:04 AM
You see, you can just close the door behind you.
I know you will not think, with the steps going away
that I'd be inside...digging my toes in the ground
while you move towards something, anything,
away from the door you close.
You know the sky will still follow you, for it cannot end
behind your ankle
the road will not waver beneath
and someone will amuse you enough outside
you will forget you have closed a room
with me in it
with me sitting in the middle of it
where you are willing to leave me now,
I just wanted to know...
do you want to close it?

dark desire
05-17-2012, 05:16 PM
Wow! Such a small thing that we never care about. Beautifully written!

Little Gal
05-28-2012, 02:37 PM
Wow! Such a small thing that we never care about. Beautifully written!

I thank you with much happiness!.. :)

louisgeorge
07-16-2012, 11:22 AM
Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???

Devilio
07-16-2012, 02:10 PM
Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???

I am sure it's the poet's own words and that is why it comes out to be so effective. :D

Little Gal
07-16-2012, 02:24 PM
Little Gal... Your words written here ring true in so many ways we cannot count ...Is it your own poem ???

Thank You, Yes I have written it... :)

cafolini
07-16-2012, 02:37 PM
Good stuff, little gal: the question.

Little Gal
07-18-2012, 05:47 AM
Good stuff, little gal: the question.

Thank You! :)