Salvation Calls

[stephofthenight]

That Grace That Bled
From Sinful Nails
Rose From The dead
My God prevails

Cleanse my heart
Please set me free
A brand new start
God plant your seed

Whips and Chains
Confine me no longer
My hearts been changed
God’s love forever

Like A lamb to slaughter
My God went freely
To save his daughter
How can this be?

Lord Draw me near
My loving Father
What shall I fear
As your serving daughter….


I wrote this to be read instead of the traditional Lords Prayer at my Baptism. Any feedback greatly appreciated.

[Maximilianus]

I like it. The rhyming pattern isn't fixed for all stanzas, but it doesn't bother me. My opinion may seem biased though http://smiles.kolobok.us/standart/scratch_one-s_head.gif ... http://smiles.kolobok.us/standart/don-t_mention.gif ... :)