thinking from fire

[organizedchaos]

you are electricity
shooting thoughts I haven't considered
in a long while
at rapid pace throughout my body
so now I'm thinking from my fire
that internal salt
that sits right beneath the surface
of the human skin
waiting to dissolve
into the constant streams and rivers
that quietly trickle
between one another

[Catamite]

While this has a rapid, stream of consious style which mirrors thought quite well, I don't that the imagery is dense enough to have a wholly lucid affect. But you've used an often dull style quite well so there's something to this.