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educatedNreverS
01-24-2012, 10:23 PM
(before this paragraph there is a story being told of a man at a bar, this follows the description of the mans personality pertaining to the perspective of a distant observer recently noticed...)
......This moment was interrupted by a sight even more impressive, if that is possible, and to this he turned away from me to welcome it like their roles were reversed. Seemingly, out of the darkness, and extracting from it all expensive beauty which can be afforded in a statement so misunderstood and provocative, came a girl, a young woman, who spelled out the word intimidating with her elegant poise and raw premonition. She obviously got what she wanted, at all times, and with this attitude she approached this story’s initial character, who sat at the bar still. At the sight of her, the recognition that someone else was truly alive seemed to occur to him, and at the sight of her, he smiled.