ultimo

[cacian]

here you stand still
looking for words
tragic device
impulsed is stalled
simple is that,
you ask for rules
you get to pull
the loudest first
but then you're struck
with those
who stay
their darkness's maze
endless they brag
their silence is
deadly to fringe.

[free]

A bit frightening in its misteriosly hidden realistic meaning. Full of allusions expressed by very definite words impressive in their clear and 'loud' way of use.

[cacian]

hi free thank you for reading.
It is not meant to be frightening and I am sorry if it did come across that way.
Thanks for the feedbback:smile5:

[Bar22do]

Your poem reminded me of "there are words that veil and silences that speak"... but why "ultimo"? perhaps "ultimately" would fit a bit better? donno... and thank you for your offering! Bar

[cacian]

Hey Bar22 thank you for reading.
I don't know of the quote but I can the resemblance.
ultimo because it is taken from a brilliant spanish band called
'el ultimo de la fila' which means the last in the line/queue..so I thought it goes well with the poem.