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[cacian]

oops sorry my mistake....here is the poem

this shade of blue
has gone too true
an image vain
comes up again
strumming two pales
over a deal,
lumminent folds
appear too bleak
shrivelled in pink
lighteness is weak,
trillions of slots
appear to freeze
against a steel
in sprint of time,
spring is in bloom
roses are plumes
seeing in smiles
a visage lured,
warlords of fumes
traverse this lune,
prominent drafts
appease the streek
newer brighter
venture is streamed,
upwards downwards
clovers are pleased,
halogenes beamed
clusters in bronze
shine thee the force,
that fly the source
here amongst earth
the pearl has struck
diamond is truce.

[Hawkman]

This belongs in the poetry games thread, methinks.

[cacian]

Hawkman the poem has been rectified.