something fishy

[MystyrMystyry]

beneath bluegum
by mercurial lake
sunlight ricochet
fractured refraction
surface craze
fractals reflecting
flicker evolving
splitting the rifts

leafy fat reefer
hazy purples
rod goes sproing
sight traces line
lost in glare
check the lock
bubbles and splash

screw cap hiss
cold beer swigs
peering across
blossom falls
feather froth
a tinkle plinks
ripples erupt

wefts and warps
as water weaves
blue eyes blink
liquid gleams
slice sliver
depths of silver
soft slither




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[Delta40]

Mmm. I rather like how this poem falsely appears to be a change of letters or anagrams to make the next line while also showing a fishing theme

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou Delta :)

[Jerrybaldy]

Gone fishing with a joint and a beer. MM Style. Whats not to love? You took it into the poetic. Always a pleasure MM.

[Helga]

I enjoyed this, the last few lines in particular

[MystyrMystyry]

Thanks JB. And I was actually sitting under a bluegum by a lake. I'm thinking I should start doing it every weekend, and maybe so.

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou very much Helga :)

[Bar22do]

I read it a few times out loud and once my mouth trained (and lactic acid chased from the little muscles) - I found it sounds truly great! Plus I learnt some new fishy words!!! quite an experience, MM (I see there if life beyond the cave! ;) )

[AuntShecky]

A veritable treat of sight and sound!

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou Bar22do :)

[MystyrMystyry]

Thankyou Aunty :)