Nothing.

[Little Gal]

I cannot feel life passing like a line beneath my palms.
I cannot hear words coming directly.
If a squirrel moves,
Or a ripple drops
What does it mean, mean to me?
I am without words
And not without them too.
I am just some particle of anything that you tread on.
Or may be,
I am what you call something, a someone or
Or may be I am like a stopped move
Of a little bent leaf
Stuck in snow.

[cafolini]

I cannot feel life passing like a line beneath my palms.
I cannot hear words coming directly.
If a squirrel moves,
Or a ripple drops
What does it mean, mean to me?
I am without words
And not without them too.
I am just some particle of anything that you tread on.
Or may be,
I am what you call something, a someone or
Or may be I am like a stopped move
Of a little bent leaf
Stuck in snow.


Hard to pin it to a wall as this or that. Very good.

[Little Gal]

Hard to pin it to a wall as this or that. Very good.

Thank you ... :)

[12sarah]

This poem was so inspirational and was great. It really struck me while I was reading it. Keep on posting your poems! Absolutely excellent job :)

[12mira]

This is so touching. It really shows what things mean in life. Very good :)

[Little Gal]

This poem was so inspirational and was great. It really struck me while I was reading it. Keep on posting your poems! Absolutely excellent job :)

Thanks a ton Sarah... :)

[Little Gal]

This is so touching. It really shows what things mean in life. Very good :)

Thanks... :)

[Devilio]

It's beautifully sad and happily beautiful :D

[Little Gal]

It's beautifully sad and happily beautiful :D

Lol devilio... now that's an appreciation...