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Theodore.K
01-06-2012, 12:03 AM
The moon hangs above us within darkness.
Weeping, identical to a widow.
Watching, as sense is drowned out
in the eruption of the night.

In the beginning of the end,
confusion is born,
questions live,
yet answers cease to exist.

Sanctuary is sought, but never found.
A million screams cry out,
horrendous pain,
masses murdered.

Chaos we enter,
peace we desire,
yet the fight continues.
For us it is all over,
we cannot escape fate,
humanity has cracked.

Jack of Hearts
01-06-2012, 03:14 AM
It's like déja-vu all over again!








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hillwalker
01-06-2012, 07:42 AM
I seem to remember reading something along the same lines as this before but I didn't get it then and I don't get it now.
Chaos lies ahead? On what basis? You don't really try to back up any of these statements

And the contradictory clichés (beginning/end : questions/answers) are just a lazy way to appear enigmatic because you have anything much to say other than that we are all doomed.

Pretty shallow stuff I'm sorry to say.

H