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the facade
12-30-2011, 03:49 PM
At a Cafe (surrounded by Wordsworths)

How brittle their faces
and dying their races,
but how textured
their words' worth -
shooting up and
mixing with airs
spiraling with smoke
spinning and settling
a beautiful layer upon
the grimy wood, themselves
and everything else around
that suffers
time and chaos.
They are weaving
the veil -
the only coat
to keep them warm
at night.

Pensive
12-30-2011, 10:14 PM
Slow death of poetry? Or perhaps death of a specific poetic style?
I guess it's the beauty of a poem we can all interpret it our own way. Thanks for sharing, I like it! :)

the facade
12-31-2011, 08:29 AM
Thanks Pensive! Happy you enjoyed it!

Bar22do
12-31-2011, 10:31 AM
The Façade, I enjoyed your poem, it reads as if it "came" to you as is, slipping out of your sleeve...! Always happy to read your stuff. Best from Bar

the facade
01-01-2012, 03:49 PM
Thank you Bar, means a lot coming from you