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Jerrybaldy
12-27-2011, 10:07 PM
I lick scabbed lips
for the kisses they remember.
I stroke fingers
for the hand jobs
they gave.
I love what pain created
for it made you
and the red, red eyes
I believe in.
If you have a vein free
it's mine.
Teach me
what poets
write shi t about,
with warm bones
and easy pens.
Give me crabs
with feelings,
screw me with your eyes shut,
take me to your streets.

Jerrybaldy
12-28-2011, 06:28 AM
I made the mistake of posting this before it was ready. Its ready now.

hillwalker
12-28-2011, 07:02 AM
Cynicism-u-like. Nobody does it better.

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Haunted
12-28-2011, 12:49 PM
Sordid and poetic at the same time, Jerry's signature no doubt. I'm so loving the opening lines, strangely romantic and sad:

I lick scabbed lips
for the kisses they remember.

Jack of Hearts
12-29-2011, 03:33 AM
Read less 'cynicism' and more 'dirty love' in this one.







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Jerrybaldy
12-29-2011, 09:50 AM
Thank you Hill, Haunted and Jack.

I volunteered to work in a homeless shelter over christmas and this was me musing on what it may be like to fall for one of the 'working girls' I met there.

Haunted
12-29-2011, 11:50 AM
Good for you Jer. The volunteer work that is, not falling for a working girl.