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cacian
12-16-2011, 11:16 AM
the colour red
flickers it's dense
morpheus fell
astonished of
its
powerful rays.

the colour red
reveals a fest
a season's dress
stilleto grace
lipstick eclat
beauty has depth.

the colour red
explosive fell
volcanic ash
ambers of heats
surges appeased
warmth is a treat.

the colour red
artistic fling
trickles of pink
purple and plum
makeup of chic
eclipse of joie.

haymanali
12-16-2011, 12:01 PM
Warm and colourful verses.

cacian
12-16-2011, 01:24 PM
thank you for a lovley feedback haymanali.:santasmil

Bar22do
12-16-2011, 06:42 PM
Red, a primary colour of light, evokes sin, guilt, pain, passion, anger, sacrifice and courage, warning... you have caught here some of them... I like best the last stanza. What do you mean by "eclipse of joie" - joie de vivre?
Thanks for sharing, best from Bar

cacian
12-17-2011, 05:15 AM
Red, a primary colour of light, evokes sin, guilt, pain, passion, anger, sacrifice and courage, warning... you have caught here some of them... I like best the last stanza. What do you mean by "eclipse of joie" - joie de vivre?
Thanks for sharing, best from Bar

Hello Bar22do
Thank you for reading my poem.
Eclipse of Joie means Eclipse of Happiness.
Joie de Vivre /happiness of living.:smile5: