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Revolte
12-15-2011, 01:33 AM
Cold and lifeless eyes
gazed hungry upon me
as if to steal my soul
and bury my body in cells
hidden three floors beneath his feet
where the bad ones go
for doing bad things
like smoking a joint
or pick-pocketing soda
to save money for children
because father is not so rich
that he can stand on top the others
scouting–like a vulture–
potential midday treats.

blank|verse
12-15-2011, 08:26 PM
I love the spontaneity and immediacy of this, Revolte, it's full of life - and I'm willing to bet it's based on real experience, as the resident bad boy of LitNet (although maybe that's not such a hard epithet to come by!).

Revolte
12-15-2011, 09:17 PM
I love the spontaneity and immediacy of this, Revolte, it's full of life - and I'm willing to bet it's based on real experience, as the resident bad boy of LitNet (although maybe that's not such a hard epithet to come by!).

Thank you and yes I had a fairly unpleasant encounter with a police officer at the adult work program office the other day when going to reschedule days. I ended up having days for christmas -_- not doing them.