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free
12-11-2011, 11:52 AM
Start and lead and carry
Fall in love, be happy and marry
I am trying to write a poem
Not to show that I'm a boheme
I know you're not going to like
That I write poems instead to bike
I do it because I have a good idea
How to save myself from fear
That I will not write anything clever
And that my book will be published never
So, forgive me for not being attractive
In my effort to be poetically active
Just don't read it to find a poetic look
Only support my intention to write a book
For when I write poems and stories
I feel so happy and have no worries
Buh4Bee
12-11-2011, 12:02 PM
The title is appropriate for such a bad attempt- why not have fun?
free
12-11-2011, 12:09 PM
The title is appropriate for such a bad attempt- why not have fun?

Thank you so much, dee4duh. I always admire your comments. It is such a pleasure reading them. Have a lovely day, my friend.
Buh4Bee
12-11-2011, 01:07 PM
Haha! I didn't think anyone paid attention to that!
free
12-11-2011, 01:12 PM
Haha! I didn't think anyone paid attention to that! And my day will be better when I hear from an old friend.

Evereyone pays attention to you. You are such a sweet person, I am sure you have lots of friends, both old and new ones. Best wishes, dear.
Little Gal
01-30-2012, 10:56 AM
OMG... I really rather liked it...
everybody writes things complex, difficult and subtle..
got tired of sophistication..
this was a fun read really!
thanks! :)
YesNo
01-30-2012, 11:50 AM
I don't know what the "instead to bike" meant, but I liked the last 2 lines and I hope you write your book.
free
11-18-2012, 01:57 PM
OMG... I really rather liked it...
everybody writes things complex, difficult and subtle..
got tired of sophistication..
this was a fun read really!
thanks! :)

Thank you, Little Gal. It is nice to see that people like what one writes. I am glad you enjoyd this poem. I enjoy writing about my thoughts and feelings in the way, I think, suits them the best. Have a lovely time. :)
free
11-18-2012, 02:14 PM
I don't know what the "instead to bike" meant, but I liked the last 2 lines and I hope you write your book.

Thanks for your comment and wishes. I hope so, too. :)

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Delta40
11-18-2012, 04:49 PM
After this length of time, it's time you posted another poem Free!