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Little Gal
12-10-2011, 01:49 PM
We have stood
Where you are standing now
Does the same stream flow?
Is the sun falling among murmurs,
Are you singing what I know?

I have leant on the bark
Which you’re gazing at
Do you wonder if you should lean too?
Walking away is that your shadow
Upon the floating blue?

This way and that
Are you thinking where to go?
Both ways have I gone,
Are you afraid to know?

hillwalker
12-11-2011, 07:10 AM
Hate the colour scheme... the first two verses are not at all bad. Personally I would have left things there and not bothered with the final verse which reads like an afterthought.

H