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CoverTheSun
12-08-2011, 03:52 AM
You hurt her
You really did

She pretended she’d moved on
She’d built the bridge

But she hadn't
Sharp razor like cuts appeared on the inside
And they never healed

They stayed open and exposed
But she hid them
So maybe you just never knew
Just how much you took away from her.

See, she’d never opened herself up before
The vulnerability was new
But she’d began to trust you
To touch her carefully
But you accidentally ripped her to pieces.

She crudely stitched herself up again
Convinced herself she’d been through worse

She hated you
For making her care
For making her tears all salty
But the real reason
I think she hated you
Was because she may have loved you.

Twota
12-08-2011, 04:21 AM
I really like it, specially the last line..

Pensive
12-08-2011, 04:40 AM
Somewhat cliched but the last line definitely has a strong impact! Thanks for sharing. :)