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argha1991
12-07-2011, 02:49 PM
WAIT...

How fast these worms fly !
To kiss death…
Unknowingly.
Neons breathing their smoky corpse out…


Haahh!!!
in this fragile smoggy sculpture,
I wait,
And wait,
And wait.

To see your eyes’ spark
Transmute into words…
Prosaic fragrance…
Dripping from thy tongue.


Shall stand still
For those crackers to make their spark & noise
Work in tandem…

Forever in vain.

Little Gal
12-08-2011, 04:08 AM
This poem is so essential in its idea and vision which I have known from you and felt from my own senses... it says so much and yet with so little space ...it moves so strong and so direct and does not rest...
I love it and reasons are so varied ...I am afraid I can't state all of them...
It is like a bundle of power fighting to fall in everywhere like strong light.

argha1991
12-08-2011, 04:13 AM
my ROMANTIC agony has dispersed... :)