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Little Gal
12-07-2011, 02:17 AM
It’s all said and done…..
Feels like it shouldn’t have begun
Too late to call it back once more
It’s melted in the rain
Long ago.

For all the days that have gone
In believing
And in living on
Trusting dreams that came along
But didn’t to my breath belong.

Have given to the little birds
Every song and all my words
All my love and all the faith
Smiling, their ends await.

………………

cacian
12-07-2011, 03:12 AM
This is such a sweet read.
Very neat.
There is an air of melancholy about it.

For all the days that have gone
In believing
And in living on
Trusting dreams that came along
But didn’t to my breath belong

This is a great stanza.
I enjoyed a lot!

Little Gal
12-07-2011, 04:05 AM
This is such a sweet read.
Very neat.
There is an air of melancholy about it.


This is a great stanza.
I enjoyed a lot!

Thank You So Much... it is always a beautiful feel to be encouraged this way!