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cacian
12-06-2011, 02:15 PM
pursuing winds off Pluto's wings
is as futile
as blowing flickers to a candle lit.

running around a garden fence
trying to sing lillies to grow,
is as cluless as a peg
dangling off a withered cane
that has substained enough a strain
is about to drop in vain.

driving a river to a pond
is
an act of reckless con,
water has it, an own command
and
you,
just a plough against a pas
are back and forth digging a drought,
about to plunge back into rows.

it is just a matter of rides
before the lead falls out of ware
metals and bolts will jolt apart,
and you shall leap out to a throw
between a zero and a no.

Little Gal
12-07-2011, 02:46 AM
The language mingles with the content in an astonishing manner ...
It sure is a great reading...

cacian
12-07-2011, 03:08 AM
Thank you Little Gal for reading my poem.