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Little Gal
12-06-2011, 02:42 AM
In ripples of untold moves
In skin color of the ancient
In veins that feel light and happy
Waiting need not be caused
Cause is but nothing more than an idea
The planting hand is yours
You can decide
Still we wait,
I do and I know
You too.
_____

cacian
12-07-2011, 04:14 AM
Again this is really nice and to the point.
The three opening lines are magnificient


In ripples of untold moves
In skin color of the ancient
In veins that feel light and happy
I really enjoy your work.
look forward to reading more!

Little Gal
12-07-2011, 03:11 PM
Again this is really nice and to the point.
The three opening lines are magnificient


I really enjoy your work.
look forward to reading more!

And I am delighted that you feel that away about it...
Thank you very much...