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cacian
11-28-2011, 11:02 AM
I stood up once
to look around,
then it was gone
almost nothing!
It came about
as if by dare
declare Not!
itslef at all,
It was obleque
then it was square
then it went round
circular half
It tried to shape
itself to C,
measurement failed
exactly that!
So It stood up
as if to me,
to try and prick
a point, a stop
to reach an end
to start again!!
It nearly did?!!
but missed the turn,
Too many dots disjointed fell
It had not grasped the lines ahead,
It just was not
as straight as rain,
thus narrowly bounced
the net again!
the scores are in
a nought is made,
to that I sat
gave up the fun
ravy to say
the chase was vain,
and so declared
the game as down.

P.S
Ravie spelty Ravy means Glad (in French)
in the same way as Savy as in savoir (old French for Knowledgable)

cafolini
11-28-2011, 11:41 AM
I like this write. It seems to have no subject other than within, so it is slightly nihilistic at first glance. But it is analogically familiar to a lot of thinking.

cacian
11-28-2011, 12:45 PM
thank you cafolini.
Glad you liked it.
I find it easier for some reason to tackl IT as a subject in my poetry.