Thinking of You

[free]

There is nothing here
apart from my bewilderment
the people and the nature
stay as before
barganing
only to get
to give no more

There is nothing here
apart from my expectations
the songs and the stories
trying as before
only to win
to lose no more

There is nothing here
apart from my questioning
you and me
wishing as before
only to meet
to separate no more

[Delta40]

Now that's how I would write an emotional void.

[Pensive]

Beautiful! :)


There is nothing here
apart from my questioning
you and me
wishing as before
only to meet
to separate no more

So candidly expressed, I like it! :)

[Little Gal]

loved the last stanza... well written...
:)