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Delta40
11-14-2011, 08:16 PM
I'm losing the race
running out of puff
yet the finish line
is so close
Because it's the end
nobody is cheering
or throwing streamers
as I stumble and fall
I can't let everyone pass me by
It's time that I crawl
time to show the crowd
I've still got something left
So I roll downhill
and make myself fit
into life's muddy ditch
Sometimes it's the
safest place to land

MystyrMystyry
11-14-2011, 08:41 PM
A marathon in your head?

This is fun Delta, the odd line about making yourself fit looked a bit like ah it's about self-improvement, and then Kapow! Er, nope - nothing like it...

I needed a laugh this morning - and I got it! :)

cafolini
11-14-2011, 09:35 PM
You'll never lose the race Delta. Come on. You don't ratrace, at least in writing. I also giggled reading this one. Have fun.

Buh4Bee
11-14-2011, 10:16 PM
I like it! Puff away lady.

Jerrybaldy
11-15-2011, 08:17 PM
As I am your friend is it ok to say that it had an air of self pity?

Delta40
11-16-2011, 12:13 AM
You guys are welcome to comment any way you like!