Lovehearts

[Jerrybaldy]

Let God bless our love as we cum,
he likes it when it’s good.
Let’s catch a train,
any place.
I have a pack of lovehearts,
pick one.
Send me a scented letter,
tell me I’m amazing.
Write me a poem, like this one,
wear your heart on your sleeve,
say something off the cuff.
Stop doing what I tell you,
I probably love you,
but we ain't gonna know.
Let me kiss your cold sore
and catch a bit of you.
Let me suck your breast
and leave a purple reminder.
Let’s make puddles
and jump on in.
It’s raining outside,
thank God, for this line,
(he likes it when it’s good).
God is gonna save us,
let’s go to church
and screw there
on the altar.

[Delta40]

A streaming forth of imagery Jerry. I like the lines

wear your heart on your sleeve,
say something off the cuff.

very witty and so in tune with the seeming spontaneity of how the poem travels.

[deryk]

I confess the first couplet reminded me of a certain Python song *cue foghorn*. I really enjoyed the dirty spontaneity of this. You really reverse the darkness.