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MystyrMystyry
11-04-2011, 05:16 PM
What of this drear morn!
All overcast and distinctly coldish
Shall it choose to rain? Or storm?
An interesting event I can only hope!
Anything to break the back of dullness
But then I see the silver flash
From the corner of mine eye
Lunch's hot beverage contained
It's but 10.30 am - who cares!
I unscrew the cap and
Proceed to spill its spoils
Splashily into the former
The scent of the perfume
Permeates my senses
Such a sumptuous aroma!
A thrill zaps up and down my spine!
Wonderful tingling sensation
Throughout my body and
Extending to the farthest reaches
Of and encompassing
The entire universe!

But how the world has changed!
Where before were greys
Now the day becomes painted in
Effervescent fluorescence,
Multi-layered patterns in the sky
And the dust clears from my mind
As if by magical spell has been cast
Oh ho! You Blue Mountain Blend!
Elixir of the Gods
And Titans before them
You have sealed the cracks
And filled the spacks

Ah! Rings out the collective sigh
As all enjoy the delight
At breakfast or brunch
At dinner or dunch

Buzzy and zippy has become my head
My eyes spin in concentric circles
Have I perhaps tippled too far?
No, never, of course not!


But I think I'll just sit down for awhile

Delta40
11-04-2011, 05:25 PM
What a colourful imagination you have. I don't like to critique your poems because part of the enjoyment in reading them is the haphazard journey they take me on!

Bar22do
11-04-2011, 08:17 PM
Warming, for sure. A thermos travels through the universe! how very charming and well said. Thanks for that picturesque moment! Bar

Buh4Bee
11-04-2011, 09:26 PM
What a way to get through a dreary morning at work. So fun.

This was particularly fun:

Buzzy and zippy has become my head
My eyes spin in concentric circles
Have I perhaps tippled too far?
No, never, of course not!

MystyrMystyry
11-05-2011, 04:32 PM
Thankyou Delta :)

I was working on an almost epic rhyming spacey thang, but I can't get back into the mood for it with the various interruptions, so I decided to put it away for a bit. And then this appeared.

MystyrMystyry
11-05-2011, 04:33 PM
Thankyou Bar22do :)

Glad you enjoyed it

MystyrMystyry
11-05-2011, 04:33 PM
Thankyou Buh4Bee :)

Fun is VERY IMPORTANT!