Death Maybe?

[zoolane]

Death Maybe?


The sound of it is enormous to me with the crack of something in my skull. The swoosh is the sea as my brain rattling round. The red cells are dripping from my nostrils suppose they are trying to escape me. The beast is back, digging it way through my succulent flesh and make the sound a delicious feast. Sharp deepen tear in the calf, giving away to the ground. Tick and pop as my arm is locate from me. The silence is dawn again with sweet golden ring to room. The scent is like mourned is it me or something else? Faded colours around me are get small and ringing of my ear is depart from onset glue which is brain matter? My eyes grow shy of opening, the white stuff is going over the blue and pupil. I am dying here and now?

[MystyrMystyry]

This is an interesting Halloween piece Zoo, and a great idea too - what goes on in the last moments.

I wish it was longer!

[hillwalker]

Extremely dark - graphic description of being eaten alive. You don't pull your punches do you?

H

[zoolane]

I was bored and again my fingers and brain worked together but as usual I did not see come until I had finish.

Thank you MM and Hill

[cafolini]

Tell us when you are finished.:nopity:

[Buh4Bee]

Zoo- I liked it. The grammar is pretty good and the description is enough to make someone want to barf.

[Delta40]

Gosh! This could just as well be a dark description of depression Zoo

[zoolane]

Could be Delta. Hmm now you say that, look at complete different angle.

[Delta40]

Have you noticed your writing is improving?

[zoolane]

I have actual, and I seem to used quite wide arrange of words. Also weird way put them together which I have not see by other author on here or a book. Maybe I just look hard enough?

[Delta40]

Well as I said before, your writing is unique and the themes of your stories seem to correspond well with your skill.