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Jack of Hearts
10-28-2011, 04:34 AM
A full moon shone across the meadow. Two lovers ran to embrace each other amid the flowers.

“Bla bla bla bla,” she wept into his large masculine arms.

“Blah,” he said while kissing her forehead and stroking her hair.

"Bla!" she said while turning away in anger.

"Blah," he said while gently reaching for her arm through the night, to stop her going.

“Bla bla!” she said, her blues looking up into his chiseled features, stoic and distant like mountains so far away.

He gave one quick nod of affirmation. “Blah,” he said tenderly.

“Bla bla bla?” her voice grew more excited now and she clutched his chest in suspense.

His eyes searched left; they searched to-and-fro. At last he conceded:

“Blah.”

hillwalker
10-28-2011, 05:19 AM
Extremely Lupine.

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Jack of Hearts
10-28-2011, 02:25 PM
You're either part of the revolution or you're not.






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Buh4Bee
10-28-2011, 04:27 PM
This works for the simple reason that you have stripped the scene down to its basic elements and the character description is perfect. I imagined at least two different scenarios as well as the dialogue. This is an excellent writing exercise.