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zoolane
10-27-2011, 04:37 PM
Green is colour of her world with new crack appear with second notice.
The spirit is in a world which beyond anyone reality.
A defend hand reach out to the choose ones.
Patience seem to come to it end.
The realm is falling from it pedlar stall.

PrinceMyshkin
10-27-2011, 04:48 PM
I think by "patient" you might mean patience. I'm not sure I follow the whole of this but I could feel the sincerity of it.

zoolane
10-27-2011, 04:57 PM
Some people might get it and some won't but their is sincerity tone to. Thank you for help with spelling.