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osho
10-23-2011, 03:26 AM
Whether I admire you or carp your thoughts
I am with you and for you
You are my part near or distant
As close as my arms

Were you not be there
I would not be babbling here
No poem would be written
No imagination be fancied
This get-together has a raison d'être
Critically or laudably but truly
Platonically or sexually
Or sheer formally
I am cabled to you no matter indistinctly or candidly

There is something in you that beguile me
I love the beguile and the snare of your cuddle

Hold me, squeeze out of me limpness
For I want to love, live and move with you
I cannot think of a world in reclusion

I lived enough slyly

I want to cannibalize this darling privacy
That is scattering sheer darkness and despair of sands
Hose my dryness with the fluid of love
For I came from you through my parent
And I live with you thru my friend

billl
10-23-2011, 03:50 AM
I have to say, I have enjoyed the language of your last three or four poems. This one fills me with questions about the meaning, and makes me smile as well for the unique turns of phrase. I look forward to reading more, and I apologize for not commenting more often on these, but it is hard to add much. In this one, a highlight was the single-lined stanza: "I lived enough slyly". Perhaps because it stood out so starkly and entertainingly as a not-at-all hidden nor sly admission.