katieexoxo
10-10-2011, 03:45 PM
I am writing an essay on punishments for animal cruelty and i don't know my 3 points to make.
My first paragraph is that if the punishments are tighter, it would deter people from harming animals. My second is that there is a connection between domestic violence and animal cruelty. I just need one more. And, are these good points?
My first paragraph is that if the punishments are tighter, it would deter people from harming animals. My second is that there is a connection between domestic violence and animal cruelty. I just need one more. And, are these good points?