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r11
09-26-2011, 11:53 AM
A New Game

Nothing is impossible!

If you dare to make it as an ordinary thing.
As the eroded limestone wall
that one would not expect it;
now it has left some pieces only.

And then there's the open path,
there are rays of light that previously hindered the hill.

Here, you're still wondering:

"How did this all happen?" your restless heart said.

There is no need to find out why:
because from the beginning that is not possible
having no courage to change
only as a game that has not been used to.

All right, this is just a collection of new rules
that must be studied before any motion to be so flexible:
play it, fully involved, and controlling its direction.

Delta40
09-26-2011, 05:34 PM
Again the ESL and tense are apparent but besides that it has a nice, easy flow.