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caTiiexO
09-17-2011, 04:38 PM
Does anybody out there feel the way I do?
Does anybody out there feel the pain I do?
Does anybody out there fake a smile too?

Does anybody ever feel like life is just untrue?
That all the things we ever do end up a deja vu?
Does anybody ever feel that our time is overdue?
That we are just a body trying to pass on through?

Does anybody out there feel the way I do?
Is anybody out there...?

tailor STATELY
09-17-2011, 07:16 PM
Welcome to Litnet !

Enjoyed.

The protagonist's angst screams through quite nicely, even when reading "the voice" as a hushed tone.

Especially enjoyed "Is anybody out there...?" a theme explored in depth in other works; see: http://www.google.com/search?client=opera&rls=en&q=%22Is+anybody+out+there%22&sourceid=opera&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8&channel=suggest
... (I particularly like the Pink Floyd references from "The Wall").

Thank you for sharing. I look forward to more of your work.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

ORJI OBINNA
04-19-2014, 11:59 AM
Nice and captivating...