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maleonpyg
09-09-2011, 08:25 PM
Must be waiting for someone special
on this late night,
for your eyes are dimming with tears
on this lonely street.

Buh4Bee
09-09-2011, 10:25 PM
Kind of like this one.

hillwalker
09-10-2011, 05:16 AM
A great improvement on your attempts at haiku - as if the freedom to dispense with form has given your thoughts wings.

H