In a Small Quiet Lane

[maleonpyg]

All is quiet and calm
except a few birds are praising
the pretty autumn

[hillwalker]

I must say I felt the final line was rather a let down - 'pretty autumn' doesn't exactly do justice to the beauty of Nature.

H

[Bar22do]

Agree with hill, and would also erase "are" before "praising", or

quiet and calm
but for a few birds
who praise the Autumn

JMO.

[tailor STATELY]

My interpretation:

silence hearkens too
the melody of bird song
lauds the autumn day

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY