Storm

[munkinhead]

Twisted in this fallen nest
is a wind torn reminder
that you have flown.
Rough edges
of tattered leaves
and scattered petals
drying in the new day
bring the news
that nothing
will ever be the same.

[Bar22do]

Sad, painful after-storm, munkin. You might want to consider losing the punctuation at all, or restore it through. Enjoyed reading this. Thanks you.