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Hoby
09-05-2011, 09:06 AM
Why is life so weird?
And our voice is not heard


Why is life so obscure?
And people's hearts are not pure


Why is life so sad?
And people's morals are getting bad



Why is life getting speedy?
And people are becoming greedy.


Why is life getting so rough?
And people's hearts are getting tough


Why is life changing its way?
Why is it becoming harder day by day?

Tolsto
09-10-2011, 10:05 AM
Life changes under the human pressure. We want to live faster and faster, better and better...

A poem to ask ourself about our own life. Good!

Delta40
09-10-2011, 06:19 PM
They're good questions to ponder over, however the rhyme steals their potential thunder. By themselves, they are rather general statements and I would find each couplet far more interesting if you expanded poetically on your own understanding of them.